--- a/www/wizards.txt	Tue Mar 12 15:43:05 2024 +0200
+++ b/www/wizards.txt	Tue Mar 12 17:11:16 2024 +0200
@@ -128,12 +128,13 @@
 
 Darol;fin;bat;darol.jpg;
 	The funniest [b]arch[/b]wizard in BatMUD .. at least in his own
-	mind. [b]No, really! He is funny.[/b] The most notable of Darol's
-	works so far are the Ancona manor, Kharim guild (The Legions of
-	Blood God), new Evil Priests guild (Triad of Darkness) and generally
+	mind. [b]No, really! He is funny.[/b] Some of the more notable works
+	of Darol so far include the Ancona manor; parts of Dortlewall and
+	the in-game story related to it; Kharim guild (The Legions of
+	Blood God); new Evil Priests guild (Triad of Darkness) and generally
 	contributing greatly to the lore of the game.
 	[p]
-	In addition he has contributed to different kinds of smaller
+	In addition he has worked on many smaller
 	projects as well, including the usual bugfixes and maintaining
 	various things. Amongst the fellow wizards he is known for his
 	megalomaniac obsession for documentation which sometimes grows